Teacher : Meenal Sutaria
Peer Review of Draft
In this class everyone’s essay was reviewed by other students, the essay about WHO AM I ?. The certain changes and requirements that were required to be made in the essay.
As I was absent I couldn’t review anyone’s work, Through this review we got to know more about others writing styles , I got a positive review for my essay with that feedback I was able to frame a title for my essay. I got appreciated for the opening and how I placed my metaphors.
I wanted to write an essay where I could pour my current state of mind about myself With this essay I got to know How I’ve not ever appreciated myself, And I’ll try to look at brighter things and choice.
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